Grammar and spelling corrections help

I’m doing a hw for my English class (Technical writing) . I just need you to correct my grammar and sentences structure, and make it more academic. re-write whatever you think is wrong. 

In addition, write a brief conclusion to my writing. 

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Thank you in advance! 

memo_eng.docx

 
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