i have an research but i want to be fix , English homework help

i did an research 7 papers i need someone to fix the grimmer mistake. and change some words.

it has a lot of academic words i want to be more simple words. it is about Palestinians and Israelis problem. it has 1500 words.

if you want to do some change that fine but it should be some things from your opinion because it is argumentative essay

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