I’m going to post the whole assignment instructors from the same one you did.
please know that you have to rewrite the paper from the beginning 8-9 pages and apply the prof comments to the new paper.
the prof comments:
This the comments I have received from the professor!!!
“You should have found philosophical principles that were clearly enunciated as they are in book #2. Then you need to use those principles to drive an evaluation of the scene either positively or negatively. Your essay is rather more descriptive than evaluative.”