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this is the profs comments , you should look at it again – does it tell the story you want to tell?  Is there anything you should take out?  Is there anything you need to add?

Also, you will want a paragraph outlining “the conversations” that are going on about KSA-Yemen — “Discussions about Yemen today usually focus on three  [2? 4?] issues.  Scholars like ___ and ___ talk about [something – culture? poverty? Iran?].  Others, like ___ and ___, focus on [what? Shia-Sunni?  Al-Qaeda?].  Others, like ___, ___, and ___ focus on [whatever the other conversation is]. In this paper, I will [focus on culture…  or “challenge those who focus on Iran…  Or whatever you want to do”  —this paragraph tells the reader (1) what people are talking about about Yemen, and (2) what you want to add to the debate about Yemen.Also, you will want a paragraph (probably the second or third paragraph) that says “This paper begins by considering the current debates about Yemen (the paragraph I just described above – called the “literature review”).  The paper will then [what does it talk about next?]  Next, the paper will …[what?].  Finally, the paper will conclude with …[what is your conclusion?].

please revise that ?

 
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