Paper needs tone fixed, English homework help

The paper needs to be cut off to 1200 words and all you have to do is following the instructions that is written by the professor. Finally this is the last chance for me and needs to be done very well ill add some more pictures soon i pick you! since the website is not allowing me to do so. 
Thanks in Advance 

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