Please help me revise my rough draft according to the following comments:
well written paper has a great topic and background. Be sure to include the information of other companies and their successes or failures with transit advertising
Fei — please work on your formatting and the layout of the report (especially the first two pages). You also need to apply APA style fully in your references.
The final draft is due tonight 11:59p.m. I really need help!